Comments on: Donna Williams’ Poetry Jam – JUNE 09

By: kinjet

kinjet — Sat, 27 Jun 2009 23:18:10 +0000

Cold dark day in the modern nights.
People don’t understand they get into fights

So much more desperation and pessimism,
slightly more superstition.

Can you see what I see in my mind inhabited
by the we; The us; The you; The me.

The normal don’t know they walk back too and fro.
Informational emotional load. The we run right on by
with the project and the vision touching in the winter
in the city beneath a steel sky.

– Kinjet

By: donna

donna — Fri, 26 Jun 2009 07:55:39 +0000

ha ha, you would
well feel free to contribute Sir Surrealist the 3rd.

By: Anthony

Anthony — Fri, 26 Jun 2009 07:08:48 +0000

I love these!! =)

By: donna

donna — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 22:06:33 +0000

Hi there lovely Devlyn.
Earthworms are fab, aren’t they
I’m going to write a poem about them.

and poetise, oh yes, poetise me, poetise me, ‘poetise’.

By: devlyn

devlyn — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 17:29:07 +0000

beginning anew; starting a new foundation of self; starting to create my inner garden, with good soil, earthworms, plants, herbs, flowers, veggies, and maybe a pear tree…
so, for a poem, could you try “my inner garden”? or something like that?

you can ask me to poetize some words for you, too.

thanks, g’day