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Donna Williams’ June 2008, 48 hr, Poetry Challenge

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Jack Frost by Donna Williams Each month I send out a challenge for people to send me a 1-2 word topic they’d like me to write a poem to and I must write all the poems in the challenge within 48 hours.People CAN’T send names (yes, everyone wants one named after their child ;-) but they can send other 1-2 word titles. Each sender only gets me writing one poem per poetry challenge and the more surreal the challenge, the better.

So feel free to send me a 1-2 word title in the comments below.

And, because some of you are budding poets yourselves, this is now where you can also ask other commenters to challenge YOU with a title too. So let’s see what happens!

Also if you are a published, self published or street poet, this is where to let people know.

Donna Williams *)

author, artist, composer, screenwriter.

author of the poetry book, Not Just Anything , published by Jessica Kingsley Publishers.

http://www.donnawilliams.net

My first challenge is from Kay for the word ‘Who’

WHO by Donna Williams copyright June 2008

Who is the stranger in the bed with me

the stranger in my head with me

the stranger in my eyes?

How can a person get so far away

from their own face

and stray so far from the human race

adrift without a home?

Is that the signpost missed along the way?

The words too hard for me to even say?

The castles in the sand?

Somewhere between here and there

I misplaced the part of me that cared

And now I stumble past

The me who had run second last

The me, I left behind.

From Xenia I got ‘Sea Shells’:

SEA SHELLS by Donna Williams, copyright Donna Williams 2008

Hard and smooth it curled in hand

My own back, weathered,

emotions bruised,

ego made redundant,

for lack of a sea shell.

From Ettina, I got “Listen”

LISTEN by Donna Williams, Copyright Donna Williams 2008

She listened

Meaning deaf ears

Cascading torrents of blah

The phrase ad naseum

Round and around

Like a broken record

You just don’t listen, do you?

OK folks, that’s the 48 hours.

Not too many poems this time, but good to see some of your own.

See you all in July.

Warmly,

Donna *)

9 Comments to

“Donna Williams’ June 2008, 48 hr, Poetry Challenge”

  1. On June 16th, 2008 at 12:33 pm Kay Says:

    Here is my challenge word to you: Who

    Will someone give me a word?

  2. On June 16th, 2008 at 12:57 pm donna Says:

    and a word for you, Kay….

    Caravan.

  3. On June 16th, 2008 at 5:11 pm Kay Says:

    Caravan by Kay

    Streams of thought
    Ideas float wildly around
    There is a wildness
    That can be found
    If one tries to search
    In the mind.

    Uncharted territory
    Who knows what’s there
    There are new roads added
    With each new topic
    It is added to the caravan of thought.

  4. On June 17th, 2008 at 4:51 pm Ettina Says:

    Mine is ‘Listen’

  5. On June 18th, 2008 at 8:35 pm Deborah I. Thorsos Says:

    Peeling Layers to True Self
    Copyright By
    Deborah Ivy Thorsos

    A thin brown tough skin of an onion being peeled away.
    Succulent and juicy white tasty layers beneath.
    One layer at a time being peeled away,
    To reveal all that is beneath.
    Tough and pointed petals of an artichoke being peeled away.
    More and more of the soft meat appear on a petal beneath.
    One petal at a time being peeled away,
    To reveal the juicy and tender artichoke heart that is beneath.
    My challenges and tainted self image in my subconscious,
    One layer at a time being peeled away,
    To reveal all of my true self that is beneath.

    http://www.dithorsos.wordpress.com

  6. On July 10th, 2008 at 1:50 am carol Says:

    Donna,
    My word for you: eventually

  7. On July 10th, 2008 at 5:20 am donna Says:

    hi Carol,

    this was June’s poetry challenge.
    I’ll run July’s in the next week.
    Each month has it’s own page.

    🙂

  8. On July 15th, 2008 at 8:19 pm Carol Says:

    I wrote this for you.

    Inside the blank
    her voice is loud.
    Inside the empty
    her eyes do shine.
    She shares with one
    “together proud”
    Her knight in this
    her husband Chris

    Love to you, CarolHawks

  9. On July 16th, 2008 at 11:51 am donna Says:

    This was wonderful.
    Chris and I enjoyed it.

    🙂